Thread:Corbierr/@comment-24596535-20141025172107/@comment-4816103-20141109193015

ALright! (That reminds me I have to read chapter 5 today)

Just off the top of my head, here's a random scene example:

Strange dream voice: You must...it is your destiny!

'''Chance stirred awake, heart pounding. Another dream? He heard blankets shuffling and looked to see that Jake and Dalton had been dreaming as well. ''They really want to contact us, don't they? ''He thought, in his tired and annoyed state. But it wasn't really the dream's fault. He still hadn't had a peaceful night in years, or at least, it was very rare for him.'''

Chance: You guys awake?

'''Jake: Yeah. Did we all have the same dream?'''

'''Dalton: I don't know! But I thought the dream was really cool! '''

He rolled his eyes and said, with a yawn, 

Chance: Whatever you say, bro...

'''Getting out of the bed, he began to pace a little bit. The others remained where they were, but he had become too awake, too deep in thought, to just sit there. I need to find my ring...and I need to do it now.'''

With that, he said nothing, and proceeded to leave the room.

Of course it doesn't need to be exactly like that, but it allows us to get inside a character's head without disrupting the script style.