Talk:Willow Jenks/@comment-5655511-20121205001344

Probably. but if there's a scene like i sugested, here's how it should play out.

Amber looks Willow dead in the eyes, and says this, " Stay away from him because we both know he would not fall for you. Just look at you. Pathetic really." Amber said quietly but harshly. Willow is totally speechless, then once Amber and Alfie leave, Willow runs into the bathroom close to tears. She leans up against the sink, facing the mirror as tears fall down her face, and she starts sobbing, not caring if anyone sees. Well that changed. "Are you alright?" a boy's voice said. Willow stopped, sniffled, and lifted her head. Then the same boy, Jerome Clarke, stepped out of one of the stalls, and looked at her almost as if to study her. "Hey. You okay?" Jerome asked. Willow panicks once she sees him, quick turns around, and wipes her tears. What are you doing in the girls toilet? Willow asked her voice still choked up from crying. Not the point. You didn't answer me. What's wrong? Jerome said. Willow utters one word, then starts to cry again. Boys... every time I'm with one, I get broken. Willow said realizing she had nothing left to wipe her face with. Jerome smiles slightly, and takes out his hanky, gives it to her, and leaves.

I know.... I'm very detailed, and get really into my writing so yah. Too much, or is it good?