User blog comment:Corbierr/If I could change the show.../@comment-7561418-20131210122048/@comment-4816103-20131210162215

Nice :) Don't worry, I liked it. Nina - Yes, standing up for herself would have been great. Fabian- True, Eddie made a good leader, I just feel Fabian would have a could have done just as well. Patricia - Character wise, she's great. But she's just never been given her own plot, everything she did was about someone else. Alfie - Oh, yeah, I agree. Jerome - maybe not Sibuna, but he should have at least remained in the mystery. Mick - closure. Yes, also meeting Eddie. I'd have liked that. Willow - exactly!

Patrome - Okay, thing is, I am sort of obsessed with the pairing, so if I were in charge, canon it would be. Don't apologize, just opinions. I was debating if I should include Patrome and decided, well, why not? Peddie - agree, I also have made their getting back together thing involve character development, because not much really changed between them by the end. Jeroy - agreed so much. I mean you have Joy and Jerome, two almost-Sibunas with plenty of experience... Being uncharacteristically oblivious. Walfie - I'd have just built it up a bit more. Mabian - agreed.

TOG- YES. Eddie and Sweetie - I don't think they had any closure at all to be honest. NO HEARTBREAKING LEAVING SCENE. I would try and make it happen over the summer, in college, or before TOR.