User blog comment:Corbierr/Fanfiction Reviews - 2/@comment-24596535-20141030100737

Thanks for the nice things you said and now moving on to the things I wanna talk about. T o be honest, I'm not that good at writing POV's. I mean, I can write something in normal writing format style, but POV's are something I've always struggled with. What you were correct with is totally no big affect in the student's minds when Mrs. Andrews announced the news. I don't know, maybe I just focused on the plot so much that I forgot to put in little 'feels' into the fanfiction, or maybe it's because I didn't want to make this chapter too long, since it already had about 1,5k words. I've also realised that there are a few, say 'scenes' that aren't really important to the plot, just like how there were many in the show its' self.

I thought that the first 2 or 3 chapters will focus on the characters more, explore about their past, and step-by-step, after all we will finally know about the characters, it will finally lead to the mystery - the tragic, the fear and all that kind of horror stuff. I didn't know if I could write everything all horror, cause if I did, I'd probably get stuck in some parts and the story may just become inactive and get cancelled.

About the script-format writing, I don't know, it's just the way I always feel like writing. Sometimes I just want to make writing more easier, so I don't struggle with anything while writing because only then I will be able to focus on the fanfiction its' self, not the way how I will write it. Erm... I don't even know if this made sense, but...

 I gotta say I agree with most of what you said about my fanfiction, and I'm planning to make the further chapters better, but as I said, as much as I, you know, love writing, I'm new to this but I still have gotta lot to learn.

'''Nah, no worries, criticism sometimes helps you improove... (I always question my self if it's improve or improove xD)'''

Thanks for reviewing my first chapter! To be honest, I find it even better that you not only said the good things about this fanfic, but marked the little bad things as well. This way I know the problems that I need to upgrade as well as I don't feel like you're lying to cheer us all up as well. You know, many people do that to 'cheer others up'.

I won't continue this comment talking about the next fanfictions, because I haven't read them yet, I'm just on my way to read the Voodoo doll.

Great blog, by the way!