Talk:The Touchstone of Ra/@comment-5224716-20130729151755

Hey! I wrote Jabian friendship oneshot and I'm not experienced in writing (I think it's my first fanfic in English?) and it'd make my day if you guys could check it out. :) It's not long, and please tell me if you found any grammar mistakes!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9541440/1/Broken-Promise