User blog:KTfan12/The Touchstone of Ra: a fan-fiction by KTfan12 (edited and revised edition)

Here's my entry for The Touchstone of Ra fanfic contest:

Chapter 1:

Sophia, Erin, Dexter, and Cassie stood in front of Anubis House, their mouths slightly open in awe. Anubis House was so... old. But Sophia smiled; she liked old things. Cassie was first to speak. " Well, here we are... after 2 months in Isis House, I mean," she said. Dexter just nodded. He was used to modern houses, not old ones. Erin, who always made the best of situations, smiled. " C'mon, it's not SO bad," "It's old, sure, but hey, it's better than Isis House." She added. Sophia nodded. "It may be cramped, but hey! it'll work," she said. "Yeah, sharing the attic with you (Sophia) and Erin will be fun,"  said Cassie. "Yeah, and I share a room with Eddie Miller- I've met him before, and he's nice; so is Fabian," said Dexter. "Let's hope my room's modern." he added. Cassie laughed; Dexter grinned. Upon entering the House, Dexter noticed that it was old. "So much for modern," mumbled Dexter. "Who's there?" called a man. He entered the room. "It's me, Cassie, and my friends Erin, Dexter, and Sophia," replied Cassie. "We've transferred from Isis House." she added. The man nodded. "Erin, Cassie, and Sophia you share the attic, Dexter you share with Fabian and Eddie; your room is down the hall, second door to the left. Girls, let me show you to your rooms. After you unpack, you may go back to school. Girls, follow me to the attic," said the man. The room smelled of fresh paint. Shinly floors glistened with light from the light of a new lightbulb. 3 beds with a trunk at the foot of each one were open. A nightsatnd stood next to each bed; on the opposite wall were three desks. Boxes stood on the beds and nightstands according to who they belonged to. Cassie quickly put her clothes in her trunk. In her top nightstand drawer she put a music box, a small photo album, and a jewelry box. In the bottom drawer went went her personal stuff. She made her bed, arranged her stuffed animals and her baby blanket, and put on her desk the nessecities; pencils, paper, and some books. She grabbed her bag and threw it over her shoulders. "I'm off to English!" she called, dashing off. Sophia laughed. "she never misses English!" she said. Erin grinned. "Thats Cassie for you!" she replied.

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