User blog:KTfan12/My season 5 novel idea- The Wisdom of Thoth (leave your thoughts please)!

OK, so I mentioned in one of my blog posts that I am writing my own made up story about season 4 (there are some goofs in there that'll be easy to fix though). Well, I set up a writing schedule and and should be done by the end of August, which made me realize, "I'm really gonna miss writing!" So I scrounged up some notebook paper and came up with 188 pages (Actually (94, but the paper is doubledd sided so that makes 188 pages) and put it in a binder and I've already made plans for a season 5 story. I have already come up with a plot I really think would work, and I want everybody's input! My idea is entitled: House of Anubis season 5: The Wisdom of Thoth.

Plot: Everyone's back at Anubis House, including Rose (she was originally named Katie but I changed the name because it sounded too much like KT), Susy, Sophia (I wrote her into the story not origanlly knowing she'd turn to stone; how she comes back to life is explained in my book), Erin, Cassie, and Dexter, along with 2 new students: 16 year old Elsa and 16 year old Ryan*, who have no other House to go to. Everything starts normal until Thoth, the Egyptian go of wisdom, visits Rose's dream and asks for help retreving his book, which grants him all his wisdom. Anyone inpure of heart who posses it could let the power go to their heads and easily take over the world. With the help of Thoth, they follow tips all over the world of an old acient book recently discovered and eventually end up in a place they thought they'd never go- Egypt.

I decide I wanted to get some input from real Sibuna fans to see what they think. I really want to do this but would love tips to see how I could make this better. If anyone has a suggestion I feel would make the book better I will gladly write it in, but remember, I only have 188 pages and can't write in too much, unless I scrounge up more notebook paper.


 * Note: The 2 new characters, Elsa and Ryan, do NOT become involved in the mystery, although they do often lend a hand with their knowledge about Egyptian mythology. They do often become suspicious, but often  let it drop when they get distracted wit their social life, love life, school work, and more, thinking the gang just needs help with school work.