Thread:SibunaSeason34/@comment-4816103-20141109200943/@comment-4816103-20141111164906

Okay xD If I like it we can just add it to Chapter 2 because all I really have is a bunch of paragraphs explaining how nobody is really doing anything and Jake is wondering where she is, he sees the basement door open and decides to go check it out. So IDK maybe yours will be more interesting, OR we could end it after the fight and start chapter 3 with your scene