Thread:Corbierr/@comment-24596535-20141025172107/@comment-4816103-20141121200146

IKR? It's so dark but I love it

Thanks :D

Yesss! I came up with an idea for that! Well, Jake helps him out the first time just out of knowing it's the right thing to do with no idea of if it happens often or why, and not because he genuinely wants to defend Chance. Afterwards, Chance publically apologizes to Jake (maybe over intercom or something if we want to go big with it) and at the house he and everyone else tell the truth about their lives and become closer as a group (this is also were we can reveal Kelly's secrets as well). Then a few days later, Chance's dad comes back, feeling the need to get revenge for being humiliated and finish "helping" his son. Jake calls him out but starts getting attacked instead, which compells Chance to finally stand up to him on his own. Jake is upset though and almost feels the need to kill C's father with his lightning ring but Chance stops him and they call the police instead.

I figured out the Kelly thing too. Well, maybe everyone is talking and laughing together and stuff but she's alone because Michelle is with Jake and she feels ignored and depressed so maybe this is when she makes her "if I killed myself noone would notice" statement. Royle overhears and the two start a conversation where more of Kelly's personality is revealed, as well as their relationship get started.

OTHER IDEAS:

For chapter 5 as well, Dalton ends up getting a crush on Clementine and, you know, Love Goddess' descendant here, he thinks it's like true love and tries to get to know her (in a very innocent and respectful but also very lovestruck and obsessive way, if that makes sense, like he won't do anything to her and try and pressure her into anything, he's just nuts about her.) In a few chapters later she can decide to talk to him and tell him that he's really nice but she's just not into him but she's interested in being friends, partly because he's so sweet, partly because he reminds her of Danny, who she can then tell him about. They develop a close friendship, but Dalton still has his crush on her and tries to be civil about it and yadda yadda.

Royle can start trying to use caffine to keep awake but she becomes overcafinated at one point and it's a disaster. IDK, just a thing that can happen.

Everyone can start finding their rings quickly, but one of the main 6 doesn't find theirs right away and gets nervous and confused, like their dream was supposed to go to someone else instead or they're just not important enough to actually find their ring or their just too stupid to find it. (Could be Royle, like she could start thinking it was meant to go to her twin brother and she feels unimportant and useless about it and wants to talk to someone but just can't express it no matter what she does)

Michelle can also start telling Jake about her mother's murder mystery, just so we can bring that up as well.