User blog comment:LittleIrish*/6 Ladies (C.1)/@comment-4816103-20140525184840

I liked it :)

For constructive criticism, I'd try adding a bit more details from the WWII era if possible, just to set the scene a bit more. And maybe remove the part where she tells you the year, because it just reads a bit oddly; Maybe just talk about how Pearl Harbor was just bombed, because people will know exactly what the setting is from that.

But other than those little things, I enjoyed it :)