Thread:Corbierr/@comment-9566240-20131114025005

SO, AS U KNOW, I CHANGED MY STORYLINE COMPLETELYYYYYY AND IM FREAKING OUT. WHAT DO YOU THINK OF MY TIMELINE:

-Newcomers Welcome Day

-Brooke meets Riley, sees Carter and Jules, Staci (Jules's friend), and Marley (Riley's friend) for the first time

-First day of school

-Brooke becomes part of Jules's group

-Brooke tells Jules she likes Carter; this makes Jules not like Brooke anymore

-Jules pays Carter $20 to go on a date with Brooke then embarrass her

-Brooke gains Carter's trust and Carter tells her about his broken past

-Carter decides not to embarrass Brooke

-They go on several dates

-Brooke leaves Jules's group when Jules posts mean things online about her

-Carter comforts Brooke

-They finally become serious and fall in love and stuff

-Jules is very mad so she tells Brooke about the paid first date

-Brooke is very upset and breaks up with Carter-Carter tries to get her back with letters, flowers, etc. but finally gives up

-Graduation after   party with drinking and smoking and stuff

-Brooke feels uncomfortable and goes home

<p style="margin:0in;font-family:Calibri;font-size:11.0pt">-Brooke gets mugged

<p style="margin:0in;font-family:Calibri;font-size:11.0pt">-Carter just happens to be walking by and he fights with the guy and scares him away

<p style="margin:0in;font-family:Calibri;font-size:11.0pt">-Carter comforts Brooke and takes her home

<p style="margin:0in;font-family:Calibri;font-size:11.0pt">-They clean up each others' cuts

<p style="margin:0in;font-family:Calibri;font-size:11.0pt">-They make up

<p style="margin:0in;font-family:Calibri;font-size:11.0pt">-Epilogue

<p style="margin:0in;font-family:Calibri;font-size:11.0pt">PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEASE  BE HONEST!!!! I DONT WANT COMPLIMENTS (UNLESS U THINK I DESERVE THEM, TEEHEE) I WANT CRITICISM!!!! <ac_metadata title="NANOWRIMO"> </ac_metadata>