User blog comment:Corbierr/Character Arcs That Should Have Happened- Part One/@comment-5450362-20141019180624

Hi bich <3

Ok, so....

Nina: Hmm, yuh, too passive for being a leader.....AND CMON WIRTERS...NINA AND JOY TALKING DIRECTLY.....MAYBE FIGHTING...BUT ACTUALLY SHOWING A REAL RELATIONSHIP...ugh...

As i said before, I would've made Nina shier and clumsier at the beggining (hmmm, more like the dutch/original Nina), and she would end as a strong, confident, leader-like woman, without losing her esence.

Fabian: Your idea is good. Though he was more of a doormat towards Nina than anything. There are also times that he's clearly afraid to say somthing (like telling Joy that he ins't into her).

Amber: Yup...she was almost perfectly written.

Patricia: Ok. She never had her own fucking plot, and because of that, she didn't really develop. She was so tied to others, to the point she never realized she doesn't say what she thinks, she didn't analyze herself. She had no one to teach her how to open up.

She kept being insecure....til the end. I MEAN. PINK DRESS. ?

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Alfie: Yup, for now, all that i can say is that Alfie was for me "the nice guy". Fabian, not really *hes hot still*