User blog comment:Corbierr/Fanfiction Reviews - 2/@comment-13880098-20141030194550

f u u were too harsh -tries not to stab u in the fucking throat about the cons-

jk lmfao thanks TIME TO JUSTIFY MYSELF:

ttf:

im very bad with beginnings as u see there is a pattern and i like to get to climaxes because climaxes are always fun to write lmfao

as for the oocness you know i have issues trying to make them in character but tbh i kinda did what i did on purpose bc i figured that they are on a different planet, i might as well create different personalities for them (truth is i didnt know what to do for their personalities and and and im bad at staying in character and and and i wanted to get the damn thing over with because it was becoming 10000000000000000000 pages long)

lmfao there will be more problems probs bc im a sucky writer

one shot:

ok tru tru i wanted to get to the part where they were being tortured buT U MUST ADMIT VICTOR'S DEATH WAS PRETTY COOL RIGHT RIGHT *sobs*

i like fast beginnings bc i hate beginnings

pls there is a warning and its halloween

u know i thought about that as soon as i posted the os im like UMMMM DID I FORGET TO EXPLAIN WHY THERE'S A CHAIN OF POSSESSION but eh i explained how fabian and nina in particular became so fucked up so

i feel like i should make a sequel to this but i dont know...like a sequel in patricia's pov about her trying to save joy and like sibuna can research stuff about the voodoo possession idfk

WAS IT REALLY THAT SCARY THOUGH? I DIDN'T THINK IT WAS OMG XD

anyway thanks for reviewing my shit XD i'll try to write better stuff and not rush but u know when you're doing five other things at the same time WHILE writing its kinda hard not to but i'll try