Thread:SunriseDaisy/@comment-17737211-20130629221123/@comment-3083473-20130701012641

Oh, yeah, and it's turning into a movie so those are the main actors of it.

Yeah, I like your avatar.

I just finished reading your story. In all your fanfictions, I feel like you have good ideas but have trouble presenting them. I'm not trying to bag on your writing, but it's just some constructive criticism. Overall, it was a very interesting story and it does attract the reader but not really including much details of setting or basic writing elements, it can confuse the reader at times. But still, it was a pretty good fanfiction.