Thread:Corbierr/@comment-24596535-20141025172107/@comment-24596535-20141121141548

I was thinking that the 5th Chapter should tell us a bit about Kelly's personality. All we said about her so far is that she's been adopted, and nothing else. I mean, yeah, we never really gotten to know what kind of person she's like and we've never got a chance to show the readers what she's been going through, what are her feelings. You know what I mean? It doesn't even need to be the whole chapter talking about her life, but maybe some kind of small scene from time to time, this way it will lead up to a scene in the future where her life secrets are all finally uncovered. I don't know though.