User blog:Corbierr/My Story

Okay, so as a few of you already learned on Chat, I, like Haley, am writing a book. I'm on chapter 13. Starting tomorrow I'll be posting chapters for you guys to read because everyone on chat seemed really interested, but before I tell you what it's about I'm going to have to ask you guys a favor.

What I need is for people to give me some...constructive critism. You see, lately I've been paranoid because my friend told me it's too slow, but before I change it I'll need some of you guys to give me your own opinions and suggestions. It doesn't have to be that deep or anything, just try and tell me what you think.

I can put some of you in it if you'd like me to btw. (Though I actually do have a minor character named Jade already. :P)

So what's it about-

The story takes place in a land called Terces, where things are perfect. Or at least, that's how it seems. You see, people go missing out of nowhere, and it happens pretty often, so nobody really cares. The main character, Mandy, didn't care until her mother disappeared, and left her a video asking her to find her cousin Warren, who leads a resistance against the government.

So basically she's on a quest to find her mother, find out the secrets of Terces, and help defeat the government.

So....yeah. That's it. Thanks guys; I'll appreciate the help and I can't wait for you guys to read it. ^^