User blog comment:Corbierr/House of Anubis: The Rise of Corbierre ~ Chapters 48-49/@comment-4741712-20140628060346

I like it, but I found 2 continuity errors:

 The first one:  “It’s really gross, first of all,” She told him, awkwardly trying to look away from Eddie and Mick. “But I think Mick is going to win.”

He sighed and didn’t respond to her. Jerome turned his attention to the clock; they had been eating for seven minutes now. Bored, he turned to Fabian. “So, Rutter. You think Mick or Eddie will win?”

Fabian shrugged. “I want to say Mick,”



 If Fabian picks the opposite, than why did Mara say Mick as well? Who picks Mick, and who picks Eddie?



 The second one:  “Patricia?” Joy asked, as Rufus stood up.

 Rufus? Where'd that come from? Is that supposed to be someone else?



 Just thought I'd let you know. I enjoyed it, though!! Keep up the good work!!!