User blog comment:Corbierr/Fanfiction Reviews - 2/@comment-24596535-20141030100737/@comment-4816103-20141030202830

POVs aren't even necessary, they're just what I'm familiar with :P Style-wise, it actually works quite well for you! Yeahhh, that makes some sense. It's okay, I tend to put too many feels and then the emotions get cheesy and stupid

Sounds awesome!

Nah, it makes sense. And you pull it off! You know, if novels don't work for you...try playwriting or movie/tv writing! Scripts :D

You're doing very well right now; so don't worry!

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IK personally I love criticism (when it's fair) and it's improve

I'm glad you liked it, and I'm happy it helped!

READ FASTER did you even read Halloween Game chapter 2 yet

Thanks bro