User blog comment:Corbierr/Wishes ~ A Jelfie OS/@comment-25576856-20141116004440

(You took some of the suggestions I made on chat, like the alternating POVS and the foot prank! Yay :D)

This was a really fun read. Everyone was really in character, and Jerome and Alfie wished for things they definitely would have wished for if they found a wish-granting orb. The cliffhanger ending was great, and I love how Alfie picked Amber over Willow. Go Amfie!

(I'm a little confused: When Jerome said that he wished they'd never found the orb, wouldn't everything they had wished been undone? Since they wouldn't have found the orb?)