Talk:The Touchstone of Ra/@comment-4821842-20130413033747

I wrote a scene for the movie, but I'm not trying to bash

(Fabian and Mara are dancing)

Mara- You're a great dancer.

Fabian- Thank you, so are you.

(They lean into kiss, but Fabian stops)

Fabian- I'm sorry, I just can't, this doesn't seem right.

Mara- It's because you still love Nina, don't you?

Fabain- Yes, I can't stop thinking about her, she's my true love.

Mara- I'm going to America with my parents this summer, they said I can take a friend, I want you to come with me so you can see Nian and tell her how much you love her.

Fabian- You want to go to America with me?

Mara- Just as friends, of course.

Fabian- Thank you Mara.